[RAP] Newest Release, Thoughts/Criticism?

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I released a new song and removed my old ones because the vocals were off-beat and the bars were awful. I've recently taken my friend's advice, and made another song, and people like this one, but it's getting 1/4 of the plays my other songs got. Any criticism/tips?

P.S. My inspiration for this is Slump God, 6ix9ine, and Pump.


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