Void Thread design for Gappy

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(03-28-2020, 08:41 PM)Graphic Artist Wrote:i do criticize everyone here so don't be offended . it's my opinion and criticisms can make you better .
take this one as reference (made by @Indeprensus)  since you're also trying to make it clean and minimalist . 
try to compare your work to this one and you'll know which part you need to improve.

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I already seen his but I think there is too many text to focus the shadow isn't really good on the cards and it's too white, should be more colors. Also don't put a dark black, just use a dark blue to the text it's way better, you should get inspiration on dribbble. It will be my last reply I don't want to bother anyone else
I'm just trying to do design here

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