Void Thread design for Gappy

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(03-28-2020, 08:25 PM)escobar Wrote:That's the second time your critic my work in under a week + you do Mascot illustration, it's a lot different than visual design bro. I'm just trying to reply nicely, if clients like my work it's the principal..

i do criticize everyone here so don't be offended . it's my opinion and criticisms can make you better .
take this one as reference (made by @Indeprensus)  since you're also trying to make it clean and minimalist . 
try to compare your work to this one and you'll know which part you need to improve.

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