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(03-28-2020, 07:46 PM)poison Wrote:lol Imagine being a mediocre designer yourself but judging other people's work.

"mediocre designer" , i'm an illustrator but i also make logos. 
i make everything from scratch , mascots , illustrations, logos, etc.

edit : everyone can criticize everything you posted here, if you're a crybaby , post somewhere else . 
or ask staffs to make your own section where criticism isn't allowed.



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(03-28-2020, 07:49 PM)Graphic Artist Wrote:"mediocre designer" , i'm an illustrator but i also make logos. 
i make everything from scratch , mascots , illustrations, logos, etc.

whenever someone posts his work you call it bad and shit talk the whole time while your designs are below mediocre.



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(03-28-2020, 07:51 PM)poison Wrote:whenever someone posts his work you call it bad and shit talk the whole time while your designs are below mediocre.


mediocre?  if you want your shit wont be criticized, don't post them here in the first place
and also i can call it bad if it's bad , and good if it's good . i don't call everyone bad here if you look at my recent post in this section, i also acknowledge those good designs.
here are some my designs , if you have any knowledge about graphic design , i challenged you to post a detailed criticism 


https://RAIDUSER.com/Thread-Logo--484287
https://RAIDUSER.com/Thread-Mascot-logo--486394
https://RAIDUSER.com/Thread-Dating-site-logo-design
https://RAIDUSER.com/Thread-Modern-Logo-design



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(03-28-2020, 07:44 PM)Graphic Artist Wrote:are you also hired to make that logo ? cause you just downloaded it here https://www.clipartmax.com/middle/m2H7G6...stmas-day/
there are so many errors on this one ,  font size , spacing , you should not put background on buttons , etc .

I know what you mean dude, but we're not in school here so there is not rules and something like that. Art is different for many people and I just follow clients mind.

Also i'm not the creator of the logo...



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(03-28-2020, 08:11 PM)escobar Wrote:I know what you mean dude, but we're not in school here so there is not rules and something like that. Art is different for many people and I just follow clients mind.

before anything , let me remind everyone that when you post a design here , you are subject for criticism. ( this is for everyone, not just you) special mention to @poison
im really tired seeing crybabies complain when i post here, like WTF ? i also praise the others but all they see is the bad comment (which is really annoying)

also your statement is wrong,  i understand that creativity has no rules but at least make it more appealing..



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(03-28-2020, 08:20 PM)Graphic Artist Wrote:before anything , let me remind everyone that when you post a design here , you are subject for criticism. ( this is for everyone, not just you) special mention to @poison
im really tired seeing crybabies complain when i post here, like WTF ? i also praise the others but all they see is the bad comment (which is really annoying)

also your statement is wrong,  i understand that creativity has no rules but at least make it more appealing..
That's the second time your critic my work in under a week + you do Mascot illustration, it's a lot different than visual design bro. I'm just trying to reply nicely, if clients like my work it's the principal..



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(03-28-2020, 08:25 PM)escobar Wrote:That's the second time your critic my work in under a week + you do Mascot illustration, it's a lot different than visual design bro. I'm just trying to reply nicely, if clients like my work it's the principal..

i do criticize everyone here so don't be offended . it's my opinion and criticisms can make you better .
take this one as reference (made by @Indeprensus)  since you're also trying to make it clean and minimalist . 
try to compare your work to this one and you'll know which part you need to improve.

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(03-28-2020, 08:41 PM)Graphic Artist Wrote:i do criticize everyone here so don't be offended . it's my opinion and criticisms can make you better .
take this one as reference (made by @Indeprensus)  since you're also trying to make it clean and minimalist . 
try to compare your work to this one and you'll know which part you need to improve.

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I already seen his but I think there is too many text to focus the shadow isn't really good on the cards and it's too white, should be more colors. Also don't put a dark black, just use a dark blue to the text it's way better, you should get inspiration on dribbble. It will be my last reply I don't want to bother anyone else
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(03-28-2020, 09:03 PM)escobar Wrote:I already seen his but I think there is too many text to focus the shadow isn't really good on the cards and it's too white, should be more colors. Also don't put a dark black, just use a dark blue to the text it's way better, you should get inspiration on dribbble. It will be my last reply I don't want to bother anyone else
I'm just trying to do design here

i post that as inspiration since that one is better than most thread designs here and you know the designer so you could ask questions if you want .

Quote:should be more colors
wrong,  good designer can get away with almost any number of colors. In general, however, the risk of using too many colors is greater than the risk of using too few.
as much as possible, try to limit it into 3 color . 

Quote: just use a dark blue to the text it's way better
For a clean page design, it is recommended that you stick with primarily black text and white backgrounds when presenting information.

Quote: It will be my last reply I don't want to bother anyone else
i see you don't want constructive criticism, but i still wish the best for you . 
and hope you get more clients .



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