[RAP] Newest Release, Thoughts/Criticism?

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I released a new song and removed my old ones because the vocals were off-beat and the bars were awful. I've recently taken my friend's advice, and made another song, and people like this one, but it's getting 1/4 of the plays my other songs got. Any criticism/tips?

P.S. My inspiration for this is Slump God, 6ix9ine, and Pump.


Soundcloud Link

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Really need some criticism, bump

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Really need some criticism, bump

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Still need some criticism lol. This might not be the place to go idk

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Need criticism. Bump.

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Not badd

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(08-25-2018, 01:53 AM)Backsnapz Wrote:Not badd

Any tips or suggestions?

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cool, but i think your voice needs some slight effects, it seems plain on it's own.

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(08-26-2018, 02:01 PM)keno Wrote:cool, but i think your voice needs some slight effects, it seems plain on it's own.

Like what effects? Light autotuning?

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(08-26-2018, 02:03 PM)Thanatophobia Wrote:Like what effects? Light autotuning?

idk what the effects are called, but maybe just something to make it less rough or something. it's still cool tho

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